Writing Style: Clean vs Layered

My stories aren't as deep or layered as some of the stories I admire. There are writers who seem to weave symbolism, interiority, and thematic meaning into every line. Their work requires digesting, slow reading, and sometimes a dictionary. Mine is more direct than that.

But what I’ve come to realize is that there isn't one correct way to tell a story, and different styles require different strengths.

Style 1: The "Clean" Approach

This style is often characterized by clear, accessible language, focusing more on pacing and plot. The writing moves forward with intention. It doesn’t linger too long on description or internal reflection unless it's important to the story. It's about control. It’s the ability to shape pacing, build tension, and understand structure, like the three-act arc, in a way that keeps a reader engaged and turning pages.

When done well, this style can feel effortless to read while still being carefully constructed. It’s the kind of writing that trusts the story to carry the weight. People often mistake this kind of simplicity for being “less than,” but simplicity requires immense skill. The ability to remove unnecessary detail without losing emotional depth isn't as easy as it may seem.

Style 2: The "Deep and Layered" Approach

This style focuses heavily on symbolism and interiority. The writing explores what characters are feeling beneath the surface, using words and phrases that convey multiple meanings at once. The author acts as a sorcerer, using their ability to "show" rather than "tell." The challenge here is balance. You don't want your writing to be too shallow, but on that same note, you don't want it to be so abstract that you lose your reader.

My advice? Pick your style. Stay consistent. Don't compare. And, as a friend of mine often tells me, give yourself grace.